I like it. It was like I was there. I loved the word choice. 5/5

Very good poem, I absolutely liked it. Although, there is a mistanke in all your stanzas. Here is the mistake. You're using "there" when it's supposed to be "their." In order to make this poem look good, you have to write the word with perfect spelling. I pointed out where the words are:

1st stanza, 4th line
2nd stanza, 2nd line
3rd stanza, 1st line
4th stanza, 3rd line
5th stanza, 2nd line
6th stanza, 1st line

Also, in the 6th stanza, 2nd line, you started it with "No neither man...." It sounds better like "Neither man...."

These are just a suggestion, but like I said it would make the poem look better. Overall, good poem.

.:CiNdY:.

Captivating. War is something that has totally changed over the century, and I use to believe that there was purpose to it. Any war after World War II seems so very primitive and obsolete.

There was one thing that kept this poem from being excellent. That would be the use of improper grammar, and spelling errors.

Cindy suggest a few, but there was one important one she missed.

First verse, first line, first word. "Starring" should be "Staring". In poetry, you always want to start of strong. So make sure it's perfect.

A good write nonetheless.

I thought this was pretty good, it had a lot of details and was really interesting to read. Though after awhile it got sort of boring, it was slightly on the long side so it made it a little hard to read at the end.
I loved the begginning of it though.
4/5
~gabriella

It's obvious how good this poem is.
It captivates you and is amazing despite any grammar or spelling errors.
Great poem.
-Krystal

Wow i have not seen someone do an actual epic poem in a while, they way you wrote that wanted me to keep me reading 5/5

AmAzInG!

You're on my favs now =]