Comments : I want to get close to you

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was really sweet and caring, I really love your writing, it's very simple yet beautiful. The only thing that I don't like is that all the poems that I've read are very similar to each other, I feel as if they could almost all be part of one poem. You're a great writer though.
    5/5
    ~gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitten

    Very well written poem i like it nice flow and rythem Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Julie

    Beautiful poem! very well written......5/5