A very warming and aw... worthy poem. You have a great way with words in this poem.

If you breck this poem into stanzas it will give off a greater sense of organization and even love for your work. Also this will boast your comments you'll get because it will be easier for the reader to read.

Great work over all

Hiya Chris,
I agree with Marcus. I find it easier to break a group of expressions into chunks (stanzas)
I would also add that spell checking your poem will highlight many simple spelling and gramatical errors. You will find the poem takes on a 'new look'. You will see good and bad repetition at a glance.
Very good though and ever so romantic. A lucky guy!