Wow.. there is something about this poem that made it really interesting and really fun to read.. even though it isn't necessarily a fun and happy poem..

I think it is your style of writing here. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I love the way you said the things you needed to say..

We won't smile to your bribes,
as love seems to be forbidden.
Shut your mouth, please,
and dream for the warmth you were never given.

I really like that stanza. The entire poem was amazingly written. Excellent job! 5/5 from me. Keep it up and thanks for the comment! =)

Sweet one , you good poet, great jop