Love dementia

by Ares   Mar 12, 2008


Golden promises of love,
was tossed out at the ocean,
never really thought,
that this could happen to me.

but you don't love me,
you never did,
you can't love me,
and you'll never will.

you cut me up,
with a toxic, toxic kiss.
making me feel like I'm,
meaningless again.

oh, what a sight..
oh what sight,
oh what a sight she turned out to be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Haha, I see some similarities from this to the song :P
    But you made it all your own, added meanings, and made it a perfect standing on its own (there was really only one part that reminded me of them) Once again I was going to pick out some of my favorite lines to show you...but the whole things is just...very good! Good job!!! Woo!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Yes, love dementia, nowdays uncureable disease. Broken promises, words that lost their meaning..

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