Superbly Written. Sad, and yeah, I know that feeling too, It really was a good way to pass a good message along, and it was sad, Bravo, this was by far one of the best I have read in a while

This is nicely written!! I like what you put at the very end and I like how you are trying to help other people. I love this poem, and please, keep writing!!

Very nice, i like to see people who are aware of the things around them and "in touch" enough to process those feelings.

Liked the poem. And its nice to feel that way about wanting to change the world but it won't happen. It would be nice though. In regards to my poem. Yes I did feel that way but not at the moment. And I don't think that's selfish. Its a personal choice. But thanks anyway. Nice poem.

You obviously are very strong person, this poem is fantastic and the message at the end, is very true...i like people that see things the same as me, i totally agree with everything you say.....well done

This was wonderfully written. I must admit, the repetition of the line was a little annoying but it worked perfectly for the ending to the poem. The flow was good, the word choice was good, and the concept was great! 5/5

A very strong and deep poem. Great word choice. 5/5

Hello all. Yes this is the comment I was talking about that I promised I would write.

I was young. My Dad had a movie on. I was in the room. On the screen there was a girl cutting her wrist. I asked my Dad why and he said that some people do that to kill themselves. I automatically widened my eyes and said that I would NEVER do that. A few years later and look at Jennifer. Not a cutter but nevertheless a wisher for death. A hypocrite. No child grows up wanting to be miserable. And I did just that. Miserable I was. I didn't have friends to talk to this stuff with. A few online friends but they still didn't know all of the story and there were only a few of them that I spoke about this with. I only had myself putting myself down over, and over, and over again. I have obsessive compulsive disorder. Does any one know what that is? I'm sure some of you have a slight idea. Germaphob, perfectionist, that sort of thing. Not quite. My mind told me things. It told me to do things or I would die, or something bad would happen. My mind would play things through my mind. Not always of me. Of others. I had to watch people suffer and die over, and over again. It played horror movies. It raped me. It showed me things without my will. I could not control it. It is just something that happened all of the time. It would show me the highest high in my mind and then put me down at the end telling me that it would never happen. It killed me. It was my suicide. It was my death. It killed me. I guess it took away the niceness and in replace put in a small box. That box was called that suicide box. These thoughts and beliefs will stay in that box. I'm sorry. I need to slowly put other things in that box. I have a very open mind. I really do. I guess because I've gone down this path that I felt I didn't have to see how other people would feel. I already went through it all so I didn't think about how the other people that haven't yet gone through what I have and gotten past the roughness of self hatred would feel. I would probably message me something mean. I don't blame you guys for being offended. I just wanted to get this out there that I don't mean to offend you. It's just what I've gone through made me look at it this way. Some people are offended while others are moved. I just want this to clear things up. I will try to say things in a nicer way and try to let people know WHY I said things in such a rude way. It's just what I've been through that gave me these firm beliefs. Good luck to ALL of you that are suffering through suicide still. I forgot that even though our goal is the same...that being death...that we are still all very different and need to heal in different ways. If I was still suicidal I'd be extremely offended and go off on myself and call me names. It's okay. I get it. I wasn't being considerate and I'm very sorry. Some people got it...others didn't. I hope this clears everything up.

You are wise beyond your years. The rising rate of suicide among young people is a major issue in the world and your poem addressed this problem from many angles

Wow this is a really powerful and touching poem.. i like how you added that extra info on the bottom because it really helps explain the reasoning and meaning behind your poem...

i really like how your poem addresses such a big issue and i like how you are trying to help people get thru it..

i liked the repetition.. it kept the whole poem together and it shows how people just keep taking their lives and the days just keep on going like it's nothing..

nice job with this one.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

Like it , kinda.
the message is strong but it still does not have the strength to move thoes who want to die from their choices.

Good!

Nice poem and if this is coming from you this is really impressive.

Very sad well written I enjoyed this 1

I really really love this poem!! I thought you wrote it really well!! Keep it up!

I really like this poem, you have a talent. umm idk if u want to hear this but im going through a lot of stuff and i kinda agree with u that it would be selfish to end it all and i know im not the only one who feels this pain but sometimes i just dont think im strong enough to deal with it all. idk

It seem like i was living it ''

i love it reallyy

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