A Dream of Reality....

by Blue   Mar 12, 2008


I'm in a field, it's almost pitch black.
I'm unaware of what I laid in?
Aware of something pulling me underneath.
Pulling me into darkness. I am now trying to get up but darkness has a hold on me. A piercing cry of words I shout! Can anyone hear me? But there is nobody out there to help… I begin to feel like my body is sinking under. What feels like sand is at my neck now. I begin to become restless. Darkness fills me, which was once filled with so much life. Darkness has a hold on me, and it's not letting go. I always knew this was coming. How come there isn't anyone to grab me from its hold? I guess nobody knows I'm here. The path between light and dark! I give in to what has a hold of all my might and matter! All my happy moments and thoughts that fills my heart! That makes me who I am.. Will be buried under this field. I cannot fight this, if I only had a little help! But I did not want anyone to know. Darkness pulls me under!

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  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    O this is a sad poem, but i like it. keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    Yeah it's my second poem... I've just started. It's kinda sad; but i had to write it. It's something that is a part of me, and i have no control over it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by KarmaXXX

    Sad poem but i like it. keep writting.