I think we all have a hunger for these things. Love is such an important thing to people, whether it is being in love, or just loving a friend, or family. |
Great piece. :] It was short, and simple, but still, so full of meaning. And the emotions you let out really went to the heart, you know. I like the structure of this piece, it's different from the ones I usually read. Definitely 5/5. :] |
One of my favorite |
It was pretty good. A few mistakes here and there but it's an all right poem. I like how you started off each line at the beginning, ya know the heart thing. It didn't grab me like I wanted it to though. It's not a bad poem I just wanted something different, new. You know what I mean. I've been reading love poems all day and each one is starting to from into one. It's not a bad poem. Trust me. I'll give it a three. Don't worry it will only bring it down to a four. |
Rowan, i liked this poem, but who is it about? |