I really like this piece...it def show your creativity! I like it...my advice is NOT to use the big spaces...they are not necessary.. like I said before tho...i its part of you creativity then thats great :)

I almost walked out
on my best friend
you know who you are and what its about
I'm sorry i ever said that it might just be the end
i wish it could all just be the same
I've realized that this is no game

^^Aww this is a sad part....yea I can def relate to this line...^^

in life we loose and we gain
its the way it goes
but i cant stand the pain

^^YES!!!! Thats exactly what I wanted to see! Excellent stanzas dear!^^

we promised to be friends forever
now we sit in this world together

^^AWWW! This is a cute, short stanza...very very sweet:)

we fight...
thats OK
somethings just don't always go right
thats what you use to say

^^Once again...can def relate to!I also admire your word choice in this line..great stuff!^^

your still my best friend
to the end of this world
to the very end!!!!

Aww great poem! I'm really surprised no one commented on it...I really like it minus the big spacing...but thats just a little thing... great job:)
Take care,
Loni

Nice poem, good flow.

I really liked it nice very nice flow and message