Loved it that was a really really good poem
5/5
Amazing Job!!!!

My heart is aching
Spirit weak
I do not hear you
When you speak
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Great opening stanza ... how we lose all sense of attention when our heart is in pain. Very well said.

Close the door
Turn out the light
Pull the shades
And hold me tight
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Oh how I can relate ... just to have arms wrapped around me, blocking out the anguish.

A piece of me
Forever gone
I do not wish
To greet the dawn
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Your ending speaks with such deep emotional sadness. To breathe another breath, starts to feel like a chore, something we just don't have the energy to do.

Very sad piece penned, filled with deep emotion!
Welcome to P&Q, a fabulous site it is.
Luanne