This poem is wonderful <33 i can tell you wrote it from your heart just by the way it sounds <333

You have some very deep thoughts and ideas here. You've expressed your emotions wonderfully. I'm sure many people can relate to it.

I think it would help this poem a lot if you separated it into more even lines and stanzas as well as making sure to use proper and complete words (like "just" not "juss", "and" not "n", etc)

Feel free to PM me if you would like more suggestions on how to improve the structure of your beautiful words.

~Ann Marie
co-manager - WWJW club