Wow...again i say "WOW". you have taken the lowest points in a relationship and turned them into the most amazing works of emotional art i have seen in a long time. Take it im only 15 but...lol. I know what i like when i see it...or read it in this case. 5/5

How very honestly spoken and penned, sure many will relate which is always a nice thing to reach out to others, so they and you know you're not alone in a feeling like this.
You've made it flow well but I kept expecting it to rhyme, rhyming is not always essential but felt this piece would work well with that. But that aside I actually think that there was a strong rhythm which held the power and sadness of these words up and made your piece beautifully unique.
Well done, 5/5

Very well written...

"I watch you hate me with your eyes,
while you wish you didn't know me.
You make me feel like dying,
as though I could really live without you. "

^^I liked the last stanza the most...specially the last line... so much emotion is hidden behind those words..

good work..