Until The Day...

by The Queen   Mar 13, 2008


Always remember what we've had
-Late nights spent cruising around,
Gazing at the vivid city's lights.
Awaiting our favorite spot.

Watching lovers
-snuggle on the cold breeze
Shivering lips eagerly meet.
As their bodies intertwined.

I could never describe the depth,
On how sad I will become.
On how my life would be;
So empty without you.

Today, I've finally seen
Dreams are not meant to last.
You will no longer be the nearest person
I know I could always turn to.

Know that, it would hurt me eternally.
For no matter how loud
-You'll shout my name,
It will never reach my ears.

As you will be sitting
-Away far across the seas,
My pen will get dry
Yet thoughts of you never will.

You won't be able to read those
I know, so I'll whisper in the wind
All the words, my heart carves for you
Until the day, until the next I will see you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow that was very beautiful i loved reading it. great kob Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    "
    Today, I've finally seen
    Dreams are not meant to last.
    "

    Thats like heart breaking to read...
    Reckon the best line in this totally awesome poem!!!!

    5/5

    xxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow the message you conveyed was so beautiful well done. very well done.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Noir

    I've got to say, just reading this reminds me of Cornish...This is quite a moving piece, where the narrator openly expresses the relationship of her and her lover, and how much he means to her.

    Its quite eloquent in the way you use your words, so.

    Again, we need to think stanzas and punctuations, would greatly ease the rhythm of this piece.

    Well done again...You're a good writer.