by Katran Mar 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
My last remnant of a life once known |
I thought this was an okay piece. I really liked the line 'The river flowed in the wrong direction', but I don't know why, maybe it was its rhyming couplet that did it. I think my favorite stanza was the third one, it flowed well and the words were used well. |