That was great! that what im going through right now! good job!

Again, you can feel the pain in this poem, the sadnes, the hurt and the betrayal, an dthe longin for something thats not coming back

Gawd girl i feel what u are or were feeling =)

Well worded great message really felt your frustration coming through in a way.....nice work

Very good, shows the confusion in the situation

good job keep it up

5/5