What I See

by Katie   Mar 13, 2008


I hide myself so you wont see
The way I live
And what I see
No judgments here
It's not allowed
Leave me be
Don't start a crowd

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its shrot and cute. some puncuation would help itflow visually, although when reading it the mouth almost adds the pauses itself.

    I almost think it would make a better quote as i could see myself using this as my senior quote (which of course i wont, but if i wanted to i could)

  • 16 years ago

    by David Ensor

    I like this, its honest. its short but says so much, i admire when people can say so much in so few words. nice work