by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Mar 13, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
I wish i could tell you how i feel but it hard for the world's to come out. i just feel like two people in one body one with a heart of gold and one with a heart of darkness i am the person people over look until you came back into my life. i was me again for the first time in year's i felt hole happy and loved and i give all my self to you. i feel loved again i hope all my fear's go in the wind, and now all these fear's is gone the one i was with is no more our love ended forever. the man i loved is back in my life forever and i am hoping and praying to the gods for him not to ever leave because this heart had holds in it and now it's feed with love this spirit was broken and now it's heeled once this person was cold inside and out is now warm all over again you made me again i thank you for that my love |
by shantavia
This is a wonderful poem |
by neo
I gotta tell you..... It seems like every poem that is a "winner" on this site has to ryme. I started to ryme just to please the masses. You write like me in the way that our poems are like personal vents or blogs. WOW. I'm gonna write about ryming just to see how many people vote/comment LOL |
by Grace
Love it of course your the best l |
by Cassie
Good poem. x i enjoyed it! |
by Hollywood
I liked it but you could have set it up better |