I like this! It's really good! It's rich with metaphors and analagies which really help you make your point. The only thing I would change would be some words-'How does it look like' should be 'what does it look like' and where you said 'but who has to wait for the rain alone' should either be 'who has to wait for the rain alone' or 'but has to wait for the rain alone' this is really, really good though!

Rock on!

Toni!

This poem inspired me to write, and I wrote on the same theme...keep it up.

Very nice and I squeezed out the last drop from your poem and found that it was sweet. very well picked and placed words, I liked the simple questions it put before us. very well done - bravo