An unfinished dream

by Sarah   Mar 13, 2008


I've dreamed of a scarlet kiss under the rain,
and I've always wanted to feel touch of rain drops on my skin,
you hold me near and whisper those love words in my ears...
All wet and cold
shivering bodies,
Unfinished dreams...
You tell me you love me;
you hug, you kiss me...
-I am warm again-
--The whole world stops!--
-This is a dream- your words echo like a dagger,
I push you away and scream:
-Why can't you be real?-
You kiss me again,
kiss my pain and fear.
...Look for me,
I am around you,
I am here...
Wake up from this dream!
Run under the rain and find me,
let our kiss kindle our hearts
let us taste how it really feels!

* Thank you my dear friend (DarkSpirit) for helping me make this poem a lot better.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Beautiful lines...Great poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Nice poem sara i love it
    well done:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mm great one i enjoyed it specialy the tiem whe you say the rain drop feeling... jsut wonderfull , jsut i hope you make paragraph make spacing between the lines to become more readable and maybe some rhyming and it will be prefect one

    i enjoy it
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Brilliant poem!
    a lot of emotion and imagination has been put into this poem you can just tell :)!
    also i really really liked this part:

    "Wake up from this dream!
    Run under the rain and find me,
    let our kiss kindle our hearts
    let us taste how it really feels!"

    Stunning!

    5/5 :))

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    What more can I say other than this was an enjoyable read. I liked the emotions and the flow of your thoughts and words. nice.

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