Wasted tears

by Love vs Fate   Mar 13, 2008


Wasted years have gone so fast,
wasted tears coming done at last.
you've felt my pain that i feel in side.

you hold my hand while i cry,
you comfort me so i don't die.
you care for me more then ever,
you mean so much to more like forever.

these wasted years i felt so alone,
but now, I'm not alone.

i have found someone who has been able to understand me.
even better then myself.

she is this girl that i feel like Ive know my whole life,
we got so close so fast, maybe its time to make it last.

she is a special girl that i wont lie, she saved me from wanting to die.

i don't know if she knows it..i don't know if she cares,
but I'm truly falling for this girl, i don't know what to do.

there is a age limit that we share.
I'm much older and yet she is younger.
but this girl I'm falling for is more then just a young girl,
she is wise, she is smart...she is mature in every single way.

i love you girl this i wont lie.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    I think out of all of your work that's posted this is my favorite=)

    I love the story behind it, and it's easy to see it's straight from the heart. And I love how you have your own flow of things.

    great work=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    Wow, this poem is wonderful!
    I'm telling you, you have such a good talent!
    Keep up the wonderful work!
    5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by loulou

    This is such a romantic poem..this is true love
    Fantastic!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    Awe, i liked it...brought a smile to my face, plus you can feel the emotion in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by LiZz

    Awww SUPER.......!!!lol....great job.!!!