Travis this is beautiful in every way. I felt the love. I felt the passion. I just felt everything. ANd you know im not that mature but i can be but thank you for such a beautiful poem. I dont care what anyone says you mean everything to me :) My world is at your hands and I know you wont fail me. You make me smile. Everything that happened to us, i feel special like a girl should.
You are another jewel to my heart :)

My heart is yours
My love is yours
I will always be here
I will always accept you
Someone just finally listens to the secret i had in my heart and i am glad its you<3

CourtneyxHolland

THAT WAS SUCH A HEART FELT POEM. i could really feel the love coming from the poem and i could also feel the pain........ its really amazin i love it! ****AMAZING**** 5/5 :p hehe :D xoxox
shanna

Really really good poem!
One of my favourites tbh!

Really good, i felt the love from it, very good

This is exalent, u have talent. keep it up boi. and age rly isnt a problem it just depends on the way u love sumone. 5/5

Hey, really great poem. your love for each other is beautiful and i hope it lasts. to many people out there are splitting up and its nice to see two people that acually care and depend on each other as a way of life. keep writing <3

I love this sooooooo much!!! =p

That had so much meaning and that was a beautiful poem about how you find that special someone.

Wasted years have gone so fast,
wasted tears coming done at last.
you've felt my pain that i feel in side.

you hold my hand while i cry,
you comfort me so i don't die.
you care for me more then ever,
you mean so much to more like forever.

These 2 stanzas were prob my favorite because I can relate to it.

GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!

Wow this is beautiful does she know u feel this way very deep poem thanks for your comment on "Only happy in eyes view"

I love this poem!!!! =p

I'm speechless i loved this poem you were so compassionate and loving and i felt all the emotions jus reading it.
absolutely my favorite
Amazing Beautiful Job!!!
5/5

Aww!!!! i love the way u put the last line seperate..it has such a strong feeling to it!!...totaly great!
***aLy***

Awww SUPER.......!!!lol....great job.!!!

Awe, i liked it...brought a smile to my face, plus you can feel the emotion in it.

This is such a romantic poem..this is true love
Fantastic!

Wow, this poem is wonderful!
I'm telling you, you have such a good talent!
Keep up the wonderful work!
5/5 :)

I think out of all of your work that's posted this is my favorite=)

I love the story behind it, and it's easy to see it's straight from the heart. And I love how you have your own flow of things.

great work=)