Oh this is like wonderful!!! But sad to come to think of it too. I wish everthing could get better travis *sighs* but what can I say, idk really but a wonderful poem. I felt what you wanted to get across, yes? I love it!

5/5 ^_^

CourtneyxHolland
Always loves you<3

That poem was gangsta yo! LOL! Good job!

Wow,
this sounds like you really did choose your words carefully.
But it needs,
more.
Idk,
I've seen alot of stuff in my life.
This just doesn't come close to being all you have to say.

Its a good story but it needs easier words to read

I like it. The edit is the usual. Capitalize here and there, gangsters becomes gangster's. It was a good poem. The flow was nice and the title was too. Five.

I love it!
Love,
Amanda

I liked this it got a point acrosse and you choose your words very carefully loved it
5/5
Good Job hun!!!

I like it.....ever see Freedom Writers? Well this poem reminds me of that movie...in the movie, everyday they graduate, for they made it threw that day alive.....