Comments : Despair's True Love

  • 16 years ago

    by KaceyBelladonna

    Sorry bout the typos... :(

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Lovely poem ... who's it about ?? very nice flow and good work ... keep it up :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Is it
    "You swivel to watch him... he grabs your friend by the waist and leads her away."
    ??

    jamez XxX

  • 16 years ago

    by spazzycat

    Awww....this poem almost made me cry! :')
    its very nice!
    keep it up!

    cait