Hiya Amber,
This was predictable, but that didn't stop my skin from crawling. The image you created was crystal clear. You penned this so well.

Michael

Are you really doing this? because i care about you, so please dont. 5/5!

Wow its sad,
is it true
but rlly great it wuz full of suspense
5/5
i loved it
:]

WHOA!!! That was just hell of amazing!!! I mean like really!! I just loved every bit of it, call me a freak why dont ya? I was very intense with it. I just couldnt stop reading but when it was over i cried for 3 minutes now here i am writting the comment but i just love it. Pure dark. Pure misery. At first i thought the girl was going to kill her father but bam she tries to cut herself to death but like i keep saying a wonderful job!!!!!!! AMAZING!! Really!!! You have such a talent o.o i wish i could give more than a 5/5 but between you and me itll be 500000000000/500000000000 :DDD

Just Keep Up the Good Work
Damn...

With Care,
CourtneyxHolland

You put so much emotion into your poems i love them!
this is my favourite tho, so sad!
xo

Alot of feeling, sorry for you, hope things do get better, really

So real, i was acting out your poem in my mind it was that clear....soooo sad though, i hope you are ok.....

Wow, is this how you feel. my best friend just tried to kill himself. and it killed me. don't you ever think of how many people u would hurt if you killed your self. if you ever need to talk to someone send me a message. i'll listen to anything you have to say. i spent a long time in a mental inst. because of suicide. and i seen the effect it had on my family and it crused me.

WOW ... do you really go threw this ... ?
i know how it feels ...
i hope that you dont really have to put up with this and i hope that you dont think of suicide ...
but it is a excelent poem aii i really love it just becuase of the effort and feelng put into this poem

I have one thing to say, cheer up, things do get better and dont worry, you can get through this!
and remember suicide is never the answer,

Dangg.

You're an |*awsome*| writer..
I love your poem.
You use excellent detail.

Is this true though?
Did he really do this to you & your mom?
=-\

-Message me (I'm concerned)
I rate it a 5/5 =]

Omg, that was so good.....
awesome writing i love it
xoxo

Wow. This is amazing. I can not believe how good this is. I almost cried reading the whole thing. I am so sorry if this is what you go through. I know what your going through though. Maybe not the parent part, but the Ms.Razorblade and Mr.Scissors part.

Wow this is a really sad but amazing story. if this is what your going through or need to talk then send me a msg. id love to talk to you. keep up the good work xx

Very good poem. I liked how you referred to the scissor and razor as Mr. and Mrs. keep writing you have talent.

Best poem i have read in a long time!!

Amazing imagry and emotion used in this poem!

Please keep writing!

Danielle
xx

5/5

That truly was a great poem i thought she was going to kill her father but killed herself... Keep writing the imagery was brilliant.... Loved it im giving so much more then a five

This is soo sad, i was like crying in the middle of reading it :'(

I freaking
LOVE
this poem
omg your so...i needa better word then talented.
Ok your so .AMAZING at writing =]

This is just such a heart-felt and painful poem, I just dont know what to say. Only thing I can utter is, I'm touched.

Keep doing what u do coz it works.

Natalie.