I thought I loved him,
I really did.
I thought i loved him,
now its the end.
he broke my heart,
and so i say
i thought you loved me,
till this day.
you were my life, my love, my soul
you made me happy,
when i felt low.
now its over ,
and you think you care.
i love you now ,
and ill love you till the end.
our love is broken,
it just wont mend.
Another good write =)
Very good job in showing simplicity, yet getting what you want to say out in a way thats hard for most to do. Great flow also
5/5