I love her more

by XAlwaysXBrokenX   Mar 13, 2008


I hate this feeling
what do i do.
i hate this feeling
its just for you.
this feeling inside me
burns and hurts
i don't know how to get
rid of it
have you had it to
i love him so dearly
but I'm in love with you
have you had this feeling
Because its just for you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow I can really relate to what your writing in here. Before me and my g/f got together I really like this guy too. But I chose her instead. It was short sweet and to the point. I really enjoy your writing. Once again great job. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good poem. Loved the way you kept it simple, yet you showed great emotion. Also the flow was great.
    Overall, perfectly written
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    I love this poem...I was in this situation not too long ago and I feel your confusion. Great poem very heartfelt

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