Wonderful poem, this line really touched me: no more we shall bleed,
5/5

So unbeliably true! such a powerful message stated in such beautiful words! job well done! goinf on my favs.! 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Wow so true that was a greta poem

Amazing absolutely loved it
5/5
good job!!!

Dang, that wuz a really good poem. it wuz so true. good job :-D

Wow i really liked this poem it was soooo true and well done omg your so good

Dude i really like your poems. this one was really good too.

I love the truth of this. Most ppl are too politically correct these days; too scared to speak the truth. the only reason its 4/5 is cuz the style isnt my complete favorite but u made it sound incredible.

That and awsome poem i believe what you said in the poem the end is near b/c i to have looked around to see whats been going on!

I once wrote a small line of words : The raised arm of man will never be a victor for it is broken in too many places. -- I think that this poem shows that to be true. I liked it and hope that we will survive the words. Peace....

This poem is really good and its the truth ....

Omg this is a really good poem....
keep it up..
i like it alot

XOXOX
Britt

I have no words for this poem

accept

great
true
flows
ect

I love this poem, we must shed our old skin, very quick and smart.