I know what this feels like its hard....but very nice 5/5

I love this poem. I can totally relate. This poem really makes sense. It is really good!!!

I really liked this. Very deep. Full of emotion and very expressive. I really related to a lot of parts of it. I really liked how its kinda of an on going fight and your facing all these different barriers and that even tho ur feeling weak inside your still pushing through even though u feel a bit weak. Voted for u in the weekly poetry contest. Well done 5/5

I liked it.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
A lot of people can relate to this.
Keep it up 5/5

Amazing! i loved your choice of words,very emotional and expressive. I really loved it ;D very good job, keep it up! 5/5!

The poem is real , deep and it makes a point. i love the way you wrote it and it just turned out amazing <33

I love this! This poem is so awesome and you did a great job on it. Keep it up!

Dat is rely gud sumtin everyone can relate 2!

I love it. when i was reading this poem it put 2 different perspectives in my head and i totally know where you are coming from through your words.

Wonderful. The flow was great and it was so easy to relate to. I know exactly how it feels and you expressed it perfectly. 5/5 i loved it
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Excellent flow and word choice in this heartfelt piece. Everything can seem upside down when we are heartbroken. Nice job on this emotional write!

I love this poem =p

Very good poem. Heartfelt and meaningful. I loved it. Well done

Tabi,
great poem [as just like all the others.]
u have such a way with ur words.
u are truly talented.
great flow.
much emotion.
easy to relate to.
i love it.

much love,
mac.<3

''Since you have left my side
i have fallen down and cant recover
strength can't pick me up and
you don't love me, is what i discovered''

u took the words out of my mouth i feel tht way i love your emotion and they way you put it all together

<3

These are just a few things I've been feeling since you decided to leave.
My world doesn't seem to make sense anymore.
In anything logical, I know longer believe.
I'm afraid the only way i will recover, is if things went back to like before.

Great conclusion. I liked this one. You had a lot to say and a lot to express and you expressed yourself very well. You make your foundation very strong when you start to write thats easily expressed. Solid and strong good job.
5/5
laura