Shattered Sun

by Indian Comma Bean   Mar 14, 2008


Broken glass shattered
on the rising sun,
Casting dancing shadows
on the faces of yesterday.

Ancient elders groan,
Awakening to the beckoning call-
Leafed beards rustling to the wind,
Slowly they alarm the wild.

Fiery blaze overlooks the knoll,
Bestowing life to weeping night,
Creatures of the nocturne flee,
As Ardent figures arise torpidly.

Whimsical melody of winged flock,
Echoing into crimson dawn,
As ivory clouds tumble over,
Time lost in unscathed meadows.

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  • 14 years ago

    by XxBabii GirlxX

    I LOVE IT!!
    it showed alot of emotion and talent ^_^
    i love your poems
    keep up the good work

    <3 dominique

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautifully worded poem. :) I enjoyed reading it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    Word choice, flow, emotion, all of it. great work! I luv your writing =]

  • 16 years ago

    by girly

    WHOAAAA. can you say talented

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Emotion, emotion, emotion! Thers so much emotion in a short and simple poem. It brings me great envy to say you have such talent to confine all this energy into a short and elegant poem.

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