Comments : Give Me the Blame

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Where did you go?
    I thought you'd come back
    You cleared my skies
    Before painting them black
    ^^^
    I love this stanza, especially the ending line!

    The entire piece paints a picture of heartache. You've expressed your sadness with such deep emotion.

    I liked the flow and content and found it to be a great read.
    As soon as I read it the title "Blame Game" shot through my head.
    Well done
    Luanne