You are so blind. yuo will never see all the love around you. you are going talk your little circles forever. and live your half life.

jesse, don't do that. don't. please.

No, my heart isn't butter
Butter is like wax
Wax can't be broken
My hearts more like glass

^ great stanza. circular, but great.

this poem is heartbreakng jesse.maybe cuz it's written by the heartbroken?

Ur gonna go thro a lot of heartbreaks in ur life 2 the piont where u just want 2 give up. but there's 1 little speck of strength that keeps draging u on...and that little speck is fate, that little speck is hope, that little speck is u, it's wat keeps u living and it's wat will get u thro this and keep getting u thro the pain. ur stronger then u think and ur gonna find the right person eventually. nearly no1 finds the person there going 2 spend the rest of their life with at this age, most don't find the right person until their in collage! so just enjoy the little time u have of being a care-free kid, life really is 2 short.

well anyway it was still a well written poem, 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Really good like I could vizualize quite abit of it.