Comments : In the world of mine

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This poem gives off such a peaceful and happy feeling.. I don't know if that is what you were going for but that is what I got from it.. it was really nice to read.

    If you see me smiling,
    then it's because I'm in my own place,
    where I live in happiness
    and feels nothing but grace

    I like that stanza. Seems like such a perfect place to be.. where nothing or no one else matters and you can just be free and happy.

    If only a place like that really did exist. Amazing job and beautiful poem. Keep it up!