As Days Go By

Gentle touch of you hand? You mean your hand. It was good. It didn't rhyme which made it easier to grade since I didn't have to pay attention to the flow in that sense. It wasn't my favorite but it does deserve a four. Good job.

I found this poem raw and simple. The words are the simplest as the structure. There are no rhymes in this poem and the flow is a little rocky. Other than that the whole concept was nice. Just because of the idea 4/5

I understand well the feeling represented in this poem. You have written a very heart felt poem here.
To me I did feel a flow, though you could you some work on the form.
None the less I give this 5*

Awe, a very beautiful write. :]
it was very cute and full of so much emotion.
The title fit well. And the beginning was a real attention grabber for me, and this was a great read. :] 5/5.

This was a very sweet poem, that came from your heart I'm sure....good poem indeed, I felt the emotion....shall read more