Comments : Your touch

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Nice poem! i really liked that showed many emotions aww! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Full of emotion poem
    good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya Chris, This is much better. The layout and the flow - brilliant!
    Good work!
    Nichael

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    Hay u know my answer lol love ya

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Little Lie

    This really good. by the way on the last line you've spelt dream, wrong you spelt it drean.
    Good poem very uplifting.