by Diana
This poem really touched me hun, because I have experienced this myself. I just never had the courage to admit it to others. Great poem! |
by Sarah
Once again a great poem... it's very nice and beautifully written. I love it ! |
by Erika
I really enjoyed this poem sweetheart. It's like you understand everything that's inside my head or vise versa. Seeing someone express their thoughts and feelings this way shows me that I don't have to keep it bottled up inside. Great job! Love Erika |
by Jaymee
Wow this one is quite depressing, but I like it. Good flow throughout and the ending was great! |
by Jackie
I love it! The ending was unexpected, which is what made the poem go from good to great. Overall it's an excellent write and it flowed very nicely. 5/5 |
Really well done! This was so emotional, and I loved your choice of words. This line was amazing: |
by jennifer
Wow Dennis, fantastic poem!! Were you reading my mind when you wrote it? |
Love it. |
by Sarah
Cute but sad poem, I like it =) |
by damont
Wonderful poem although it was sad it was well written and the point was very clear. keep writing |
by talesha
Great poem and superb ending |