Nice poem!!!>...
The deep words you used added to the effect of the poem!!...

go0d job..5/5
keep writing..

You are terrific in expressing your emotions.A superb imaginative piece of art.I give you full marks.Remember you are playing with fire as it is indicated by the intensity of your emotions.All the best.

You really expressed your feelings good on this poem. And I can relate to this....oh yes, I can... Great poem! 5/5