I love it.... this is great, the passion is so wonderful great job.... 5/5

First, this is irrelevant, but I absolutly love the title. I think about a year and a half ago I wrote a poem with the same title but it was so different to this (I think, I've since lost it along with all other poems on my old account).
I think that it's a minor form of plagarism, though, if you use a bands song title in poetry and don't say where it's from. A mod might pick you up on that if you aren't careful.

I don't quite understand how flying feels like falling in this poem, I read it twice. There's not real indication that you're falling in love in the poem; you used 'I love you' but there was no indication that it was the first time it was said to the other person? I understand the flying, though ;)

I think you did a pretty good job with this poem, it's descriptive in the right ways, maybe a little too basic in your rhyming, but other than that I like it.
You had he hooked from the beginning.
Great job, 5/5

jess ~