by No Name Needed Mar 14, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It's been two years since we fell apart, |
The rhyming scheme was screwy. Try to never rhyme the same word with itself. I enjoyed the first stanza. I wish you used different words in your poem. I prefer more complex words and I tend to not enjoy love poems because they're unusually very similar to all of the other love poems. I'll give it a three. |