This is really good! My favorite line is 'Superious to stars and inferior to sun'. You know what? I can't think of one thing to change! Rock out :P Good job..more dear sir, more! (poems that is :P)

Toni!

I feel it s a sweet poem, what we think u ve expressed in words, keep it up!

I call you a budding poet who is also budding poetry through my pen...
God bless you