~Stuck~**

by TaTy   May 21, 2004


~Please comment and vote it really means a lot to me. Thank you~

I?m stuck in this wall,
With no windows or doors,
It?s black all around me
And I can?t move my bones.

I?m frozen in time,
I?m scared what to see,
So I keep my eyes closed,
Hoping someone will find me.

I open my eyes,
And I see your reflection,
Why are you just standing there?
Can?t you see my rejection?

I?m rejected by everyone,
That looks in my eyes,
Because they don?t really see me,
They see my disguise.

They see a happy girl,
With a smile on her face,
And they shut out the true her,
That cries in her place.

Why don?t you answer me?
Why do you look at me that way?
Why can?t you see I need your help,
To get out of this empty place?

I?m stuck in this wall,
With no window or doors,
It?s dark all around me,
And I can?t feel my heart beat.

My eyes start to focus,
and I can see who you are,
you?re me in the mirror,
my soul trapped inside,
I can?t take it anymore,
So again I close my eyes.

I try to think it?s all a dream,
But it?s nothing more than the truth,
I built this wall around me,
and now I'm stuck inside myself trying to break free!

~written by: Kristin Nicole~
05-21-04 ~ Friday ~ 4:42 pm.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Another great poem!! Wonderful job! I feel this was as well...hehel. Anyway, wonderful job!
    Luv,
    Amy

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    WOW!!! Great job! I saw the mirror thing coming (only cuz I have a similar concept in one of mine... almost wish I didn't, just to see if I'd been surprised by it...LOL)

    Anyway... GREAT GREAT work!

  • 20 years ago

    by TaTy

    Thanks all... it means a lot to me, to hear what you think. Thank you again...
    and Insane, I'll try to prove other wise...lol =)