My Love

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Mar 15, 2008


You captured my heart,
So quickly as I say,
You are my one,
My one and only to this day,

I Give myself to you,
In each and every way,
My love will never cease,
Or will it fade away,

I promise to you,
I never will betray,
Lead you into tears,
Or even to dismay,

Tell me you'll love me 'til the end,
Tell me your love will never stray,
All of these wonderful things,
I feel for you today,

Never will I leave you,
Never to betray,
This is what I think at night,
When I kneel and pray

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Again its nicely flow and have alot of feeling, keep in your great jop

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Awww...Sweetness...XDD...
    A sweet message coming from a guy that is crazy madly in love..
    Everything is perfect...Flows perfectly...

    Hope things between u guys work well..

    **Hugz**

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this poem, you did a wonderful job with it. The ending, though. . . IDK, like the whole " when i kneel and pray" - it doesn't work for me, i kinda think it sounds weird. lol, but it's not like horrible or anything - it just kinda threw me off. it wasn't like a booom! omg, amazing ending. it was just like there, and not even the best line, if you get what i'm saying

    the poem is great though, you did a wonderful job.
    and i think you finally got back to your daniel-ish poetry. lol.

    keep it up.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is nice, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    This is an excellent poem and I love it. I like like the flow and your word choice. Keep up the good work.

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