Awww!! I love it!! 5/5

I love this poem because it really seems to capture how you feel about someone. Giving them all you have, very cute=] good job.

I really like this poem... it got a nice flow to it, i can just imagine how you could read it out to the one its made for..! wish someone made that kind of poem to me :-D

keep it up - really good work!

This is an excellent poem and I love it. I like like the flow and your word choice. Keep up the good work.

It is nice, good job.

I really liked this poem, you did a wonderful job with it. The ending, though. . . IDK, like the whole " when i kneel and pray" - it doesn't work for me, i kinda think it sounds weird. lol, but it's not like horrible or anything - it just kinda threw me off. it wasn't like a booom! omg, amazing ending. it was just like there, and not even the best line, if you get what i'm saying

the poem is great though, you did a wonderful job.
and i think you finally got back to your daniel-ish poetry. lol.

keep it up.
5/5

Awww...Sweetness...XDD...
A sweet message coming from a guy that is crazy madly in love..
Everything is perfect...Flows perfectly...

Hope things between u guys work well..

**Hugz**

Again its nicely flow and have alot of feeling, keep in your great jop