Frustration

by Kim   Mar 15, 2008


It is frustrating
To see
Everyone lives my dreams
But me

It is frustrating
To show
Less than what you are
I know

It is frustrating
To me
That I am not what I
Can be

It is frustrating
To wait
For the time all is

Too late...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Nice one. it really makes me frusterated just reading it! lol. i speak the truth. wonderful format and very nice. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by JCV

    Love the poem. keep on writing. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poseur

    Again, love. 5/5 your style is awsome. niice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Niels

    Wow Kim, I too almost felt frustrated when reading this poem haha. That's because of the words you pick and the structure of your poem. You don't finish sentences and that creates tension.

    Really great job! Keep up this work! 5/5

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