Comments : Betrayed Friendship

  • 16 years ago

    by Niels

    This poem really gives a good picture of a lost relation(friend)ship. Both people learned from it.

    Nice word choice! Especially like the last stanza because of that!

    Great Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a really good poem!
    The word choice is very good and the end is very strong.
    Well done!
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    I really liked the last line *and so do you..* it was a really cool way to end the poem and very unique. wonderful write. 5/5 ~KM~