by ABake Mar 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
* This is VERY long . More of a story then a poem , but I would appreciate it if you took the time to r/r/c . Please and thank you . * |
by dora
Omg!! this was soo worth reading!! that was soo beautiful, i loved every line. a beautiful lil love story. i loved the ending! i love how u set it out, great job!! 5/5 from me!! keep writing! xo |
by Lu
Slipping into bed , I grab the delicate box from the pocket - I scan all of the possibilities and before I get the chance to open it my phone vibrates with a text message . In this silence it sounds like a bulldozer though ; Of course , it is from you , just saying ' I love you my angel . ' Carefully , I open the box - I did not find a ring , nor something of materialistic value , but a piece of paper which told the tale of a midnight love adventure . . . |