Slipping into bed , I grab the delicate box from the pocket - I scan all of the possibilities and before I get the chance to open it my phone vibrates with a text message . In this silence it sounds like a bulldozer though ; Of course , it is from you , just saying ' I love you my angel . ' Carefully , I open the box - I did not find a ring , nor something of materialistic value , but a piece of paper which told the tale of a midnight love adventure . . .
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I really enjoyed this ending. The romance of opening something precious ... not materialistic ... just makes our hearts go pitter-patter. It's the little things that say "I love you" more than anything.

I really enjoy reading short stories! This one had such an air of young love and romance to it
and the setting brought me down the road ... of memory lane.
Times when life was simple, sweet and beautiful. Times were a million kisses were enough to satisfy our taste for desire .... and sweet true love meant sharing a kiss and holding hands .... so unlike these days.

You have woven a tale of sweet love in this magical little gem ... a read I much enjoyed.

Tales Of A Midnight Love Adventure
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I really do love your title but .... I think I would remove the "s" from Tales .... unless you are intending on doing a part2, 3 ect ....
Which I would be very interested in reading.

Well done, very enjoyable
Luanne

Omg!! this was soo worth reading!! that was soo beautiful, i loved every line. a beautiful lil love story. i loved the ending! i love how u set it out, great job!! 5/5 from me!! keep writing! xo