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by Ares Mar 15, 2008 category : Life, society / about society
And I fell like dead bodies fall, through the clouds and stars, of my dream. what did I do last night? is the question I keep asking myself...I understand now, how the wine has played her, tricks. the sun creeps slowly over, the wooden hills and I, can't remember what I did last night. so I fall like dead bodies fall, through the clouds and stars, of my dream.
by Gabba Gabba Hey
Wow..this is good on several different levels..and you can look at it many different ways...good job only thing: in the third stanza, it shouldn't be 'have', but 'has'!
by neo
You are the best
by Goodbye
Keep on writing :D