This is like..I can't even find a word. Its amazing. The lines that really stood out for me were..'Cinderella you shall go to the ball, you will run down the steps and there you will fall' Definitley riveting. 6/5 great work..

I think i'll find few words for it, i know you've put this into the dark poems, but you've got read this on a sunny day, you'll find humour in there. Over all while i still have breath of me from intense giggling, i will that the poem brings a cross a strong message - that fairy tales can have it's down sides and can be associated with real life problems. Maybe not the awesomely long hair or the pumpkinmobile part, but i hope you see what i mean... lovely poem ^_^

Good stuff here girl"" fairy tales have
bad things in the middle of them but they
always have a happy ending. We need these
happy endings It's call HOPE. without hope
alot of us would'nd even get out of the bed in the morning.