by Midnight Sun Mar 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Holding his strong hand |
by charles
That brought back memories. I know exactly how it feels! Great write. |
by oldthings
Damnit! its like its written about me, i'm him! haha. |
I liked this poem a lot, and I usually don't like love poems, they're either too lovey and about the perfect love or about the loss of it. Either of these are fine, as long as they're written well, which they rarely are. |
Wow, beautifully written! Every line was perfect and filled with emotion! Great work! |
by *Charisma*
That was really great! I loved the way you did that with the one line being at the end of the stanzas. It was so well done, and the very last line, was perfect! Good rhymes and good flow. The third and fifth stanzas were my favorite! |