True Love

Good poem. I felt that it lacked the sort of structure that was needed in order to excell it to the next level. I think that it's one of the poems that seem to be more words and talking then a poem.

I did enjoy th poem and don't get me wrong, I believe that you have potential as a writer as this is the third poem I've read from you.

Very well done...truly great.

That was a very beautiful and romantic dedication of your love for him. These words could be perfect wedding vows. I loved every word of it. 5/5

My heart skips a BEAT... sorry to keep pointing out things you misspelled but it kinda bugs me....

but i like this one.... i really do.you are showing that you are in love with him but are only assuming he feels the same... maybe you should do one from his point of view to show the readers that he loves you as much as you love him...

I really like this piece from the beginning to the end. Your choice of words and descriptions are great and the flow seem flawless in each stanza. Whole poem posses true beauty and you expressed emotions greatly.
The first stanza is my favorite one.
Keep up!

Ah yes the love of a poets pen layed before us on the pages of life, I liked this poem and read it a few times. I can see myself in this many years ago. pain comes to refresh my wounded heart. Peace be with you in your young life